Everest Mountain
Some climb to reach the summit
Some are left behind or wrecked
For aspiring dreams
We chase you to win or lose
Tommorow I will be here.
Thank you to sir Alan S. Jeeves for all the inspiring titles.
Jul 01, 2020
Be It What It May
About This Poem
Last Few Words: The Sedoka is an unrhymed poem made up of two three-line katauta with the following syllable counts: 5/7/7, 5/7/7. A Sedoka, pair of katauta as a single poem, may address the same subject from differing perspectives.
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Dear Teddy
Always great to find you her, such a great poetry mate to read and value my words.
Thank you for the heads up too !
Sir Alan
Your compliment is priceless. Your suggestion is valid too. I'm sure though as well as my dear readers that Everest can be pronounced as three syllables [Ev-er-ist] or two syllables [Ev-rist], but I'm taking a master's suggestion with pleasure.
Many thanks
Much
appreciate your kindness sir!
I must say it was great fun to use your twisted titles
Than you.
Be It What It May
Hi, Rula,
Another inspiring poem. What other way to express the great challenge of Everest than through the hard work of a challenging poetry form. Both your theme and form bring out the best in one another.
Thank you!
L
And your
Comment is true an insignia on my page dear.Thank you!
Hi Rula
Nice couplet of Haikus/Senryus as the case may be
hope all is well...i am back here after a while...
be well...
Dearest raj
Wow! Thanks for coming back. You and your works were missed by everyone here.
Thanks for reading my first attempt at katautas.I am sure you would like to try it one day.
Welcome back.
Hi again Rula
Tell me about the katautas form....may be i might then try it...
take best care...
Of course
you can find all about it in the last few words.
Looking forward to reading yours.
Hi again Rula
now i am confused between katuka and sedoka :)
be well dear friend..