A new seed
a new womb
a newer younger
smarter man
fresh sperm
sorry seed
from millions
and
another new mom is born
but why do you all
post a comment
then delete it
new breed of seed?
of post corona generation
lol
Jun 27, 2020
Lovely Seeds Any Takers
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Right off the bat... the all
Right off the bat... the all caps... big no no in my book. You're shouting your poetry at me! Not really polite in online reading forums etc.. Not sure I get what you're actually talking about. I just simply cannot follow the train of thoughts, that they really make enough sense. Well, that's me I need a spell out idea that follows smoothly to seem logical. Just my two cents. Social media is something, though isn't it? Text speak and other weird happenings in chats. Lol. I assume this is basically about social media comments.?
As a new man post Corona
A new seed
a new womb
a newer younger
smarter man
fresh sperm
sorry seed
from millions
and
another new mom is born
another generation
lol
sorry
I haven't read you
this however does not pertain to you
ever