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Jun 27, 2020
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Second title less poem (title shop)

i am not a painter, I am a poet.
Why? I think I would rather be
painter, but I am not. Well,

For instance, Mike Goldberg
is starting painting, I drop in.
"sit down and have a drink."he
says. I drink, we drink.I look
up. "You have sardines in it."
"yes, it needed something there."
"Oh." I go and the days go by
and I drop in again. The painting
is going on, and I go, and the days
go by. I drop in.Where's 'Sardines?"

All that's left is just
letters. "It was too much."Mike says.

But me? One day I am thinking of
a color: orange.I write a line
about orange.Pretty soon it is a
whole page of words, not lines.
Then another page. There should be
so much more, not of orange, of
words, of how terrible orange is
and life. Days go by.It is even in
prose. I am a real poet. My poem
is finished an I haven't mentioned
orange yet. It's twelve poems, I call
it ORANGES. And one day in a gallery
I see Mike's painting, called Sardines.

By Frank O'Hara

About This Poem

Last Few Words: OK. This time I will post my suggested title Last instead of first so get to scratching your heads lol

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

About the Author

Region, Country: South Carolina, United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Frost

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Geezer

Geezer

4 years 10 months ago

I like the title; "The Orange Sardines". Thinking of sardines and how they disappeared, I was struck by the way your poem was about oranges, but they never appeared until you were finished and used them for the title. The sardines were prominent until the painting was finished and then they disappeared. The two thoughts combined to make "Orange Sardines"! ~ Geez.
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S

They might be alright along side green eggs and ham.................

Rula

Rula

4 years 10 months ago

"Sardines In The Galary"
Just trying to add some fun to the whole thing.I wanted to give the reader some food for thought and some fun too.

S

Hopefully somebody took the sardines out of the gallery before they turned bad lol

Lavender

I would call it: The Process. Both forms of art started in one place, and evolved into something else.
Thanks!
L

S

Time, Sardines and Oranges. I'll give ya'll the poet's title this evening in case somebody else want to weigh in