Lindame

Opals strung nightly
Across evenings jet skies,
Sparkles of her voice.

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Haiku form

Style/Type: Structured: Eastern

Editing Stage: Not actively editing

About the Author

Region, Country: USA, ZZB

Comments

Hello Lindame

and a warm welcome to Neopoet.
A very fine haiku to start with. It has a wonderful imagery.
You've done great with just few words which is not always easy.
Looking for more of your works.

Hi

Thanks for the welcome. I love haiku. Been writing for many years learning forms etc.. I prefer concise poetry, it's more my style I think.

Nice

Ahahaa thanks a lot Muse!

Hi Lindame and welcome to

Hi Lindame and welcome to Neopoets. Lovely haiku, the images are perfect. Don't you mean "evening's"? Just a small nit.
All the best, Gracy

I like Haiku...

and this fits the traditional style, Very nice and strong solid thought.
~ Geezer.
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