lovedly
lovedly
Jun 25, 2020

Archaic Rainbows

I just went out
rain simmering
the sun trying to find its ways
through autumn leaves

but then as I stood still
saw two rainbows
lined one far away
another smaller

I went to the loo
to think if I could
with a third do
pulled curtains
and
switched on my torch

wow third rainbow came
did you not see
as I did longer than long pee
o me silly
asking Sally

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read

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Comments

Gracy

Gracy

4 years 10 months ago

Hi Lovedly, your poem reminds me of seeing 3 rainbows over the pampas in Argentina. Your going to the loo made me laugh. Your title is perfect and the theme also.
I'll return as it's late now, all the best, Gracy

lovedly

its a pleasure ma'am
My first ENGLISH BOOK was from Argentina
FAR AWAY AND LONG AGO
DID you ever read it
ALL about orchards
guys and gals roamed about
like free birds
BUTTERFLIES AND Queenbees
full of flutter and honey