See her awaiting in the wings
feel her gently tug at your heart strings
She is whispering words yet unclear
words she hopes that you will hear
Her thoughts are being tossed and thrown
to the watching wolves that howl and moan
She waits for the one that holds the key
never knowing who that one might be
Her heart knows where it should belong
still she knows that is another song
So watch her waiting in the wings
then feel as she gently tugs your heart strings
Comments
Another Song
Hi, Chrys,
This is beautiful! I feel it is the birth of a song.
Thank you,
L
lavender
Thank you so much. I wrote this for a very dear friend of mine who was an entertainer at the time
nice song
minor typo last line
lynn
lovedly
thank you
corrected the typo thanks for catching that
Hello C lynn
A very tender song... I especially like the "waiting in the wing line". I thought you could spice this song up with more internal rhymes if you see what I mean.
Just an opinion dear. The choice is always yours.
Rula
you are the 2nd person to call it a song it really isn't what would you suggest as far as spice lol seriously I'm open to all suggestions
Alan
thank you taking the time
I did use your corrections but am still tossing waiting and awaiting around not sure awaiting is sitting with me
there's a certain kind of
there's a certain kind of beauty here, it makes me dream of a pure innocents that one should never hurt.
Tyro
Thank you for your kind words
Teddy
I saw the changes immediately and they are so subtle that bith versions sit well
thanks for your input