lovedly
lovedly
May 27, 2020

Titles........LET'S WAIT..My latest poem

''Awesome poetic blend
of the poet''s expression
flowing like a river
that ultimately unites
in the sea.
Skunk, flunk and hunk
made it even more daring.
Awesome beautifully written.

Admirations and appreciations Sir.''

ADD ON
''The flames of anguish
Burns that was exquisite
Leaving ashes that serve manure
Holy is the soul
Who refrain it whole.
What victory it is
Saying
I''m best
You are less......

(PLEASE TITLE IT)

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read

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Comments

Gracy

Gracy

4 years 11 months ago

Hello lovedly, intriguing poem, not sure that I understand all. Terry has given you a fine title and understands far more that I do, at first read. Small nit below:

"made it even more dared." I suppose you mean "daring"?
Thank you, Gracy