Silently into the night
into the silence of the chilly fright
with softest music did they us delight
a distant note on a lively accordion
followed by a reverberation on a violin
silently into the eerie night
sounds of soft musical lovely quotes
to our ears were like soothing anecdotes
sounds of soft musical lovely notes
to our ears were like smoothing anecdotes.
silently into the night they strung
whistling by then had suddenly sprung
blowing clarinets from distant sand dunes
were like variable softly played lullaby tunes.
silently yeah yeah into the moistened night
Comments
Silently...
Hello, Lovedly,
Feels somewhat like a song? Very descriptive and delightful, but with all the musical references, does not seem too silent. Perhaps softly?
Thank you!
L
yes this is a true occurrence at midnight
when we all had only TRANSISTORS
DO you know ?
And
I heard drummers guys enjoying perhaps somewhere in Miami beach
millions of miles away
I composed my poem
became a song
Glad you liked it
Hmmmm...
Yeah, yeah? Sounds like the British invasion, if you ask me. Nice music lovedly. ~ Geezer.
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thanks for the read Gee....
so i am keeping yeah yeah
thanks ---so many liked it
Is it a song fit poetry
music to ears
and
so all my cheers