2020

Quarantined wishes
masked dreams, and more coffined plans
Death is everywhere

About This Poem

Style/Type: Structured: Eastern

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Jordan, JOR

Favorite Poets: I favor the ones who are closer to humanity and

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Dear Mark

Can't thank you enough for passing by with these encouraging words. Always appreciated!

At first...

I thought that you meant confined plans, but then I understood; coffined plans, a double meaning?
~ Geezer.
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Thank you Gee

Inspired by everything goes around, I thought coffined goes well with masks and quarantines, hope that that makes sense.

Good one, I don't know whether this is a special form, but I'd suggest your turning it into 4 lines. An idea to TorT, of course.
BTW, do you all see my poems and comments, because Gee says I'm posting in a place where only I can see the poems. Please let me know because it's become an issue. I don't see anywhere else to post. Tx

Hello Gracy

So happy to see you on my page.your comment is v. much welcomed.
To answer your question, this is a 5_7_5 haiku form though not a haiku theme I guess
Many thanks

new words have been heard

Rula from you
after years coffined or confined
anything is possible

WHITE GHOSTLY CASTS

But like angels complete their task
you fairly unmask
courageous medicinal flask
if anyone does ask

Hello Lovedly

Thank you. Always great to know that fresh words are being used. I guess this is something positive, isn't it?
Highly appreciate your visit.

yeah for sure

do read my OWLISH (poetry )
night bird
Lovedly

All my poems are germinated in my dreams
in the morning
I collect the buds seeds and leaves
Rula you would love to now read