Borrowed Sun

HOPE Kindly

the light has not gone
again the sun today
has shone
so will it
morn after morn
till a newer mankind
continues to be born

A brave mask
must all Humans
adorn

See the sun
has smiled after long
and
again it has come
to shine
create another fresher
humans man-mine

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read

A dozen poems
in STREAM
UNREAD
so it seems
So not to waste your time
I am going to
lock out
going in for a
LONG ISOLATION
COWARD 19

What a poignant poem, if only some people understood we all need each other. Very well put. Regards Roscoe..

neopoets are very few
like you

we all know
the sun smiled at me
and you followed too

Now I shall also keep track of you
Let our sun
be a common
SON
THANKS RGDS

It seems that I can't leave you alone for a minute. Remember, I always read you, just don't alays have the time to critique or comment
~ Geezer.
.

but have to courage to comment
ur too good for me
Gee

You are just a different kind of poet. We are all individuals that express differently
~ Geezer.
.

yes one of a KIND

You are just a

different UNIQUE

kind of poet