I'm feeling angry
for no apparent reason
so please, fuck right off
Feb 09, 2011
Angry Senryu
About This Poem
Last Few Words: oh dear I am in a bad mood ;) rrraaaaaarrrr got to let it out somewhere though eh? hoping to transform it into joy eventually :)
Style/Type: Structured: Eastern
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Dear Beki..
i liked the forthrightness of this haiku...hitting the nail right on its head....
much love..
Thanks raj, wasn't sure how
Thanks raj, wasn't sure how it would go down, just needed to get it out :) much love Beki xxx
Peeks over the back of the couch
Should I dare mention this would actually be a senryu. If not - I'll just stay back here out of sight. ;-)
lol :) and thanks for
lol :) and thanks for pointing that out, I did wonder :) title changed ,you can come out from behind the sofa now, much love Beki xxx
Well I say *uck you
Well I say *uck you
and your little doggie too,
love, the wicked witch
Is this a senyru or a haiku?
Oh, something wicked this way comes and it's heading straight for you: A BAD POEM!
Batten down the hatches! Bring out the cruicifix, holy water and the picture post cards,
it's time for an exorcism. ;-)
~A
Are we not in Kansas anymore?
Are we not in Kansas anymore? ;) much love Beki xxx ps maybe it's a hybrid x
lol
better pissed off than pissed on lol...................scribbler
indeed, scribbler, indeed :)
indeed, scribbler, indeed :) much love Beki xxx
Beki
LMAO
"so, please, fuck right off!"
I love this line.
Sweet Lady, be angry more often, this is worth it!
LOL
Thanks Jim, but I'm not so
Thanks Jim, but I'm not so sure, I don't think it suits me :) much love Beki xxx