A very diplomatic poet
decided to wait
let his girl fan
show her gait
ere he upon her charms
does begin to vibrate
this composition
of a poem
in silence
let her wait
golf balls
in his pocket
keep her in waiting
why be blunt
better remain silent
lovely cool decision
why be erratic
let time roll by
like a golf ball
off one's pocket
on to the greener carpet
cell now switched off...
Comments
lovedly
intriguing ot least was mildly amused at your wording the ttle is what drew me in
thanks a mighty
for being amused
lynn
love
I have always maintained the title is the most important part of a poem as it captures he readers attention and the the first line holds their attention to want to read on would you not agree?
glad you liked it
many days no one read it
so I changed the TITLE
Yes title attracts