What I love about Her
I love
How random she is
How she’s unique
I love how she wears eyeliner on her face and
Nothing else
I love her ease with kids
I love how her voice sounds
And what she says
I love how she films her whole face and isn’t scared to post it
I really like her
I want to love her
Feb 01, 2020
What I love about Her
About This Poem
Review Request Direction:
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Hannah
You have the basics here for a good oem.. Instead of "I Love how she etc etc etc"
write your thoughts in a more poetic light
example
I love how unique she is
her voice
her ease with a child
etc then continue your thoughts