She looked into
my eye
held it longer
for a while
more than three seconds
not done
unless for nightly fun
but none was done
so keep away from strangers' eye
many em vie
why feel shy
hold on for a while
in lovedly's style
She looked into
my eye
held it longer
for a while
more than three seconds
not done
unless for nightly fun
but none was done
so keep away from strangers' eye
many em vie
why feel shy
hold on for a while
in lovedly's style
Last Few Words: they say eye contact is dangerous some may give inappropriate messages some invites how would one know
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
lol
looked into just one of your eyes eh? Yeah those lying eyes. Nice fun poem
thanks
scribbler
and
Jerry
fun is life's
pun
we all still do
and
have since eons done
b merry have
++++++++++fun