Trouble
Trouble
Jan 25, 2020

A father of a son

A father of a son
Wonderful to see
A person that look just like me
On the day he was born
Where promises
I vowed to keep

Truth and honor
Are the only drugs
He will see

I am the father of a son
His teacher of a life complete
Sometimes I take for granted
The quiet conversations in things that he needs

Questions about life
Questions about dreams
I reply you are my son be all that you can be
When you become a father
Truth and honor
Will always give you peace

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: Detroit Mi

Favorite Poets: my poets are john Coltrane and Sarah Vaughan OK they are not poets but their music is reason that I write . I want my poetry to flow like their music

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Comments

Geezer

that disappoints me about this one, is that you didn't keep up the rhyme, but it is there, you just have to unbury it! ~ Gee.
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Trouble

I'm trying gee thanks for the love this is only the second poem that I posted maybe I'm a little rusty but I enjoy the chat line with you and all the other members

Geezer

on this one, is that you haven't kept up the rhyme! It's there, but buried! I felt it wanting, trying to get out all the way through! ~ Gee.
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