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Oct 26, 2019

Autumns and Winters of Life

79 Autumns I have seen
in a life that cannot be forgotten

54 Winters We have seen
since attachment as destined .

How many more autumnal poetry
I shall compose
can anyone now suppose

Many chills we have to bear
winter here kills

so we trot away to another sanctuary
migrate as birds
see you next summer
be patient please .

now going for a morning walk
wait kindly

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read

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Comments

Geezer

with a little mystery and I just had to try and figure out; why the discrepancy between the amount of Autumns and winters that you have seen? I'm counting twenty-five. I am guessing that you have spent twenty-five years in some warm and balmy place, waiting for your winter to be gone, before you return to the temperate climate. ~ Geezer.
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S

You is a Canadian goose, that flies south for the Winter, probably one of those, judging by your travels goes South of the equator for Winter.
.25 years of missing Winter send me some tickets please lol
Have a lovely summer again young Bard,
Yours Ian ..

Roscoe Lane

Fifty four years watching Autumns and winters together, that deserves praise on it's own. Congrats, may yous see many more, Regards Roscoe..

Geezer

I just got the numbers mixed up. I meant fifty-four. You must have been twenty-five when you met.
Too many late nights, lately. LoL
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