When an angel cries
Wind and thunder
a roiling sky
storm is approaching fast
if only it would last
Lightening flashes
then it slashes a wound
in an already broken sky
Suddenly
like a bolt hurled by Zeus
an onyx stallion appears
wings ablaze
sparks flying from his hooves
a wild passionate stare
A roar to rival Thor
he stands before an angel
and bows his head to her
A diamond tear trickles from his eye
and that is when an angel cries
Comments
beautiful poem. can't find
beautiful poem. can't find one thing to change
Cathy
Thank you for taking the time to read and your kind comment
great poem
i love it...Thor the god of thunder protecting earth is profoundly written in the elegant piece..
Barbara
Yhank you so much for your kind comment
what an excellent
poem no mistakes at all
angels know it after all
rosyme
Thank you kindly
I LOVE IT. .
Wow...finally a poem that in words of passion had that movie playing right in front of my eyes. “An onyx stallion appears, wings ablaze. . Etc. etc. A diamond tear. Just wonderful imagery. Great job!
like a bolt hurled by Zeus
an onyx stallion appears
wings ablaze
sparks flying from his hooves
a wild passionate stare
A roar to rival Thor
he stands before an angel
and bows his head to her
A diamond tear trickles from his eye
and that is when an angel cries
Many Thanks
for your very kind comments
Alan
thank you so much I truly appreciate your to kind words