Geezer
Geezer
Dec 01, 2011

Piss Off...

Your gods are imaginated, your values really suck
I'm everything you've hated and I don't give a fuck
What makes you think that you're so great;
" I'm better than you are? "
Compared to you, a maggot, is a flaming star

Perverted priests of your religions, bugger little kids
Our leaders have us broken, we're on financial skids
You talk about world peace, while destroying other's citys
Blow up little children, while they're sucking mommy's titties

I hate you all, each and everyone, hick farmers and the cops
Teachers, politicians... and janitors swinging mops
Old ladies driving oh so slow, Boy Scouts and Girl Scouts too
Marines and Sailors, Airforce, protecting us, from all of you

The nice guy lets you go first, makes another later still
Now he'll have to drive a little faster; boy, if looks could kill
Sister Sue, goes to church on every goddam' Sunday
She's fucking half the football team, on any given Monday

Nice people are just hiding, dirty secrets from us all
Daddy rubs his cock, at the girl from down the hall
Your Momma has the hots, for the morning game-show host
She masturbates while watching, and eating buttered toast

You entertain ideas, just thinking, you understand
I didn't do it; I didn't sin, I just used my hand!
I hate you all, you can't judge me, you don't have the right
You do-gooders and fucked up people, don't really see the light

I'm not really evil, how dare you think it so
I'm just telling secrets, the ones you don't want to know
I'll bet, if you were to think, about it for a minute
You would find that it's the truth, and this poem... you are in it

About This Poem

Last Few Words: I think I like this one better, although the vacuum-cleaner salesman is a real crumb. ~ Gee

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: New York State - USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Poe

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Comments

loved

loved

13 years 5 months ago

its like whistle blowing
each fucker knows ,
we all use our hands,
more than our minds
and your poetry
excels more
than mines
wonderful nudity
at its naked best
i hope others give a standing ovation
while one 's does stand

Geezer

like hearing what you have to say, Loved. You don't think it went too far? I love that line about wonderful nudity at it's naked best. You have improved much since I first read your work. I might not always comment or critique your poems, but I always read them! ~ Gee

loved

Than I deserve...
Thanks for your lovely consoling soothing magnificent
And
so many more superlative words...

How I wish more folks like you walked this
EARTH
it takes decades to learn
and
I am endeavouring ,
nay STRUGGLING STILL

S

If you can ever get over your reluctance to say what you really feel, you might be able to write a poem like this.....oops, too late lmao....................stan

Geezer

for the read and comment, I tried hard to piss off almost everyone I could think of, but everybody seems to like it! Even the folks down at the taxi office and some of my passengers even want a copy of it. ~ Gee

Race_9togo

I'll use a word I normally dislike, but is absolutely appropriate here.

Briliant.

And no, not over the top at all.

I echo Jess's opinion; I wish it mine.

Bookmarked.

Geezer

Geezer

13 years 4 months ago

I am flattered. I always like to hear that people like what I wrote, but this one exceeded my expectations. i thought for sure that someone would hate it! LOL~ Gee

wesley snow

There are some problems with meter here that probably only bother me, but the poem as a whole is a rich, romping rant.
wesley

Geezer

there are a couple of places that stumble just a bit, but I think that I will eventually smooth them out. Just enjoying the moment right now. Thank you, ~ Gee

Candlewitch

Well... I think it is completely over the top! and I love it! An excellently atempt and success at offending everyone!

always, Cat

Geezer

was at least moderatly offended. LOL I like to think that I got everyone to thinking about the little secrets that we all have and don't want anyone to find out. We all have them!
~ Gee

K

Don't you just hate raving & ranting poets? I do. Seems they're the ones who spout off with the truth that no one will be wiser if found.

Smile.

~A

Eduardo Cruz

stuff like this makes me laugh, because who you wrote for will never understand.
Great piece of writing my friend, I thought it as matter-o-fact.

Eddie

Geezer

that you got that big of a laugh at this one. I meant it to be funny, as well as insulting. I guess I did a pretty good job! Thanks for the read and the comment, ~ Gee P.S. Feel free to critique it any time.

infinite_dwarf

*stands and cheers* I absolutely love the tenacity of this write. Just the unabashed waving of the middle finger at everyone. Over the top? EH! Now't of the soart!

Geezer

you in quite awhile. Just coming back to the site? Glad to see you in any case. Thanks for the read and comment.This was a challenge from weird elf, to see how many people we could piss off. From what I have seen of the comments, everybody likes it! How far do one have to go to piss people off? LOL Thanks for stopping by, ~ Geezer

Geezer

another's poem here, I thought of this one that has lain molding in the dungeon of lost and forgotten efforts. I got some pretty good reviews and I am not shy about bringing it out into the light of today; to see if it might provoke someone and piss them off! I wiped the dust from it and made a couple of little changes to the scansion and let's see! ~ Gee.
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lovedly

and that was in earlier ages
when some one kicked out sexiest female poets
who composed like men masturbating.
I read this one now perchance
then I noted it was your best really
and I was happy with the comments

I had made on nuditty
You know Cols Morgan sued the POPE and so nothing is hidden. I have spoken and seen the worldly folks
all do the same thing
LOL
I AM STANDING
CAN YOU SEE
WHAT !
OH NO not that
STANDING OVATION I GIVE
gee to thee

Geezer

look that movie up! Glad you liked it! It was a fun write! I would guess that some of my best work is of a comedic nature and this one is just too funny to piss anyone off! Thanks Mark. ~ Gee.
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Geezer

say things that have people going; "Whoa! That's not something that people like to hear and you shouldn't say it." Yes, it's true. There are many things that people, in general, don't want to hear; and try as hard as they want to excuse themselves, will have to admit to. I feel the same about politics and what we see going on here in our country now. Those people that support a crass and dangerous man; a threat to our peace and Democracy/Republic, are fooling themselves. They profess to be "Good Christians" but support a man that lies, lusts after every good-looking woman that he sees and cheats at everything
he touches. But they will overlook these faults because; "He puts money in our pockets, he's stopping the immigrants that want to steal our economy." Talk about being hypocrites! Anyway, off the soap-box and back to the real world. Thank you for your glowing review and comments. Glad you enjoyed, ~ Geez.
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