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Jun 20, 2019

YOU"LL DIE......or maybe not

Do you want a sold out crowd
ten thousand strong and cheering loud
just to hear your soul set free?
Then do not write poetry.

Or maybe you are seeking fame
the kind where people know your name
and show others just to see...
Be sure to not write poetry.

Perhaps you want a lot of money,
a big house in the land of milk and honey
owning land as far as you can see.
you'll not get there writing poetry.

But if you just want to share your tale
in words that don't sound dull and stale
have a slim chance at eternity
you Might be recalled with poetry.

About This Poem

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: South Carolina, United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Frost

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Simon

Simon

5 years 10 months ago

Maybe I can talk about myself right now for I did not know about other writers, I love poetry and am so passionate about it for it gives me rest and joy that's why I writer it.
Though money and fame are the primary reasons most people hustle for,and you just heat a nail on the head nice one I guess.

S

I write mainly to share and to develop another something to do other than hunt and fish as my body won't let me do those into old age. But I see no reason why I can't assail people with bad poetry for years to come lol. Thanks for dropping by

lovedly

from 2019 only one is going to read it
shed no tears
wash away all fears
and as Jess always said
never hanker

no one reads me
you are a modern celebrity
published
Stan got bags of money
eh!

Candlewitch

you put it all in a nut shell! my favorite stanza Is:

But if you just want to share your tale
in words that don't sound dull and stale
have a slim chance at eternity
you Might be recalled with poetry.

as always, with your charm and wit, I am charmed!
*hugs, Cat