Very sentimental poetry
I recall my mom’s last eyes
no tears
Smiles as she passed by
tears did not then come into my eyes I too smiled
Then it rained all day and night
mom’s smiles went away
now I thirst for those looks till today
as she passed away
it rains till today
nearly five decades away
she still smiles daily at me
I my mom can see
smiling with me
It does no longer rain
now it only snows
heaven knows
when she calls out to me
when are you coming
I smile back and ask
Are you still waiting for me
INSPIRED Inspiration Contest JUNE 2019
Loveliest Poem ''My Mom’s Smiles''
My Mom's Smiles
is my Classic poem
so many have praised it
beyond sky levels
across the Internet
do make it a point to read it
you also have moms lovely
She still comes to me daily
smiles really and earnestly
and says
Son I am still waiting for you
but take your time
I aren’t in no hurry
Though here there is no worry
The Lord looks after us absolutely
really earnestly
like you my son did religiously
But meeting you
will be my universal desire
fulfilled in entire
and continue to post more poetry
reading you son is really lovely.
Yes she passed away
almost more than fifty years
gone Times’ lonely path way
No one has come
to for ever stay
we all shall also pass away
but love to for, as long stay
you too old poets may
Comments
This is lovedly here my JUN INSPIRATION CONEST POEM
HELLOOOOOOO ALL NEO SOME TECHY PROBS BEING ENCOUNTERED
dear JUDGE
PLease read LOVEDLY ONLY
SOME TECH PROBLEMS SORRY
LOVEDONE IS NOT CORRECT
HENCE THE REQUEST THANKS
I am still alive hope all know
yes its me lovedly
no smiles lovedly
now new NEO lot
don't know thee
so byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
OLDER ONES HAVE no time for
lovedly
it was nearly the winner Marks
but for the single judge
none read a winner
poem new comers could/should
dear lovedly,
such a wonderful poem! smiles through and through. you have some great memories here. when the black dog comes sniffing around, you must fight off the gloom and hold tight to the sunshine of your mom's beautiful smiles. don't let the darkness take you my friend, Lovedly...
Love, Cat & eddy
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so kind of you Cats
You are the first one here now who read it MY MOM MUST BE SMILING THANKS
MOMS SMILES .....REFERENCE FOR
GEE