how good are the clouds
if they don't soak the land
with grey emotions
and clear the skies;
as do tears
lighten the heart, and
brighten the eyes.
Mar 27, 2019
precipitation
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Kind of...
like eye wash for the brain. ~ Geezer.
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glad raj 4 u
you decided to return
the neopoets await you
serendipity is also back
have no fear about poetry
it's for all and free
compose good ones as you are capable of
I have noticed on AP
You are a poet lovely
Have NO FEAR of
partisan
here now no one reads me
so I post occasionally
only
but raj ur sub-lime
now become real lime
An awesome
return raj. Eloquent and fresh!
Keep them coming!
Thanks for reading
Actually I am not happy about it and shall be unpublishing it...
before you unpublish
raj should i remove my verbosity
you did not appreciate it
so it seems
I'm aware u don't like my comments
henceforth
none
has nothing to do with your
has nothing to do with your comment Lovedly..
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nice poem. I like the
nice poem. I like the comparison between the rain clearing the air and tears brightening the eyes.
thanks for reading
but I shall be un publishing this because I didn't like it myself...
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really
like your approach. to the point. a really good poem. glad you did not unpublish.