My coffee?
I got it as cold
As the early morning breeze.
How I never realized
That your breath adds
The warmth to every
life detail!
Dec 19, 2018
Away From You!
About This Poem
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
A perfect piece to remind me
A perfect piece to remind me you can never fully appreciate the presence and love of another unless your inner formulation includes their potential absence Nice write Rula
Thank you
really appreciate your comment and value it highly zebra.
Salam, Rula.
Love this piece.
Khalid
Thank you
Khalid... Nice to receive a comment from you bro.
Says a lot in such few words
Says a lot in such few words Rula...very meaningful about mere presence of someone else adds value to the experience...if I read it right it underscores the value of togetherness...
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Hello raj
not sure how I missed your comment here.
Thank you.
miss your presence. Hope all is well.