raj
Nov 28, 2018

By The Shore

I know not
how many sat by this shore.
I can't imagine
what they heard, saw, inhaled
laughter, sunset, sea shells; and
was it salt or sugar for them.

I wonder
if they let their spirit
ebb and flow,
or if they drowned it
in turbulent waves.
May be some absently drew
a ship without sails
to feel the thrill of a voyage,
or some let the waves
play with their toes
and slip away.

I keep returning
to these haunting shores,
where I find my true self
writing short stories and poems
feeling the wind on my face
dedicating them
to the past, present and setting sun
knowing it will rise again.

About This Poem

Last Few Words: this is an attempt at implied imagery

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Direction: How was my language use?
How does this theme appeal to you?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Somewhere in the world, IND

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Comments

lovedly

excellent imagery

we all love to sit by the shores
more when one is singularly alone
and
see the vast ocean quivering
like do thee
awaiting the new
promised surfee

S

This poem left me with a feeling of contentment and calmness. Thank you

R

thanks for reading and your good words...
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R

for reading...i truly wish it helps the reader to feel happy, hopeful and reminiscent and make them believe that it can happen again for them....and for them to believe that good things can happen again. for them...life is of immense possibilities...it's all about keeping the spirit alive..isn't it?

believe in the sun will rise again...
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