Once upon a time
Letting all align
Getting through a line
Pulling hard the twine
Every thought on mind
Gazing through the hind
All along like blind
Only get behind
To be seen ahead
Blindly set forget
Getting rid to set
Never met at then
Peeping through the side
Looking all of kind
Slowly walk remind
At last set aside
Comments
Before I comment, Olaniyi,
ask yourself why this poem has received no feedback for 1 month 2 weeks.
I can offer two reasons. On your profile you don't talk about yourself, you self-aggrandise. Write your profile about yourself, not like a self-promoting CV.
Most importantly you have given no feedback to anyone else. This is a community where we help each other. You need to give to receive.
Appreciation
Thanks a bunch...Will apply...
eeww,
especially writing your profile in the third person is inappropriate. Here we a colleagues, peers and friends, sometimes even family, not self-promoters.
The poem has depths I can't fathom at first reading. It is well crafted. I will come back to it. ok?
I do like
"He is persistent and uncompromising in his pursuit for spreading wide morals, values and the beauty of nature."
Yes, kindness is the highest moral value.