raj
Sep 30, 2018

Equinox

I wasn't sure
what to make of this Equinox
till I remembered
to add a bit of fizz
to endure longer nights ahead

I added ice and soda
to energize my waning drink
tingling my nostrils, warming my heart
with flavors of winter, waiting in the wings
for fall to make its final call

the drama played out
in my cat's eyes
who almost spilled my drink

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Somewhere in the world, IND

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Comments

S

love the way you took something as simple as a beverage and transitioned into seasons lol nice write

R

for reading and your good words...
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Rula

Rula

6 years 6 months ago

those last lines about the cat flow fabulously raj.

R

raj

6 years 6 months ago

Good to know the last few lines made you exclaim :) I left it to reader's imagination as to what the cat might have done to spill the drink...any guesses?

thanks for reading....
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