raj
Sep 17, 2018

Just You

If I've to remember
just two,
one of them
would be you

if fewer,
it would be
just you

if nothing,
then there isn't
anything
worth remembering

It's You
who makes Me
whole

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Somewhere in the world, IND

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Comments

R

for reading and your approving comment..
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Rula

Rula

6 years 7 months ago

this one raj. It's simple but not without sincere sentiments. I thought it's clever too!
Nothing to suggest but much appreciation!

R

Hi friend Rula...thanks for your approving comment..
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