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eyes of glass reflect the fragile; those with vision overlook
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About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Somewhere in the world, IND

Comments

Mmmmm

Can't say I have totally apprehend it.
I guess this is the beauty of poetry. Each one reads it differently and still enjoy it.
For me yes, glass is fragile, but it is also transparent and warm. I sometimes prefer it to wood or metal.
A thought provoking "mini-poem" dear raj.

Rula

you are almost there in perceiving the essence of this one. It can be perceived in more than one way from the point of view of the eyes of glass and it's subject/object
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Hmmm.........

Hmmmm......... I think I get it. Sometimes the blind see more than those with perfect sight. This could be turned into a very good Senryu i think........damn! now i got a headache from being made to think lol.........stan

thanks Stan

for reading and commenting ...hope the headache is gone...lol...
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