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Nov 08, 2010

As Age Catches Up!

As We Age!

As age catches up,

I am now getting a feeling

We must write shorter poems

I won't say crisp,

Lest it once again causes,
A slip

And
In the minds of the elite

It gives them a chance
To lisp

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Style/Type: Free verse

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Country/Region: ROU

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14 years 5 months ago

incidentally
i wrote one unknowingly

THE RELIGIOSITY OF RELIGION

ITS TOTALLY DIFFERENT
ur comments
my only isolated friend
over this neopoets new band

lets go hand in hand
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14 years 2 months ago

AGE HAS CAUGHT UP

As age catches up,

I am now getting a feeling

We must write shorter poems

I won't say crisp,

Lest it once again causes,
A slip

And
In the minds of the elite

It gives them a chance
To lisp

S

I guess I need to write an epic so when age catches up and shortens my poems they won't all be Haiku lol...........scribbler

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