raj
Sep 06, 2018

(L i f e)

(Life) is in parenthesis
birth on one side,
mystery on the other
in between
what we make of it..
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About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Direction: How does this theme appeal to you?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Somewhere in the world, IND

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Comments

Rula

Rula

6 years 7 months ago

A good read raj. I like those thoughts when they spark with an urge to write them- often happen to me-.I don't know if it is the same here.

PS. maybe you'd like to change the [brackets] to (parenthesis)
to go with your words? Just saying.

R

You are right Rula

the words popped out of nowhere...may be somewhere from the subconscious...as for parenthesis I shall change the punctuation mark...thanks for noticing it...
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lovedly

but 4 birth
u may say
(genetics mix)
afterwards (zero)
in between
(fully yours own)
just a thought

I know I am no patch on u raj