W E A L T H: Fehu [Runic Symbols]

When W e a l t h equals ethics, it lasts endlessly when everything else's lost.

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Jordan, JOR

Favorite Poets: I favor the ones who are closer to humanity and

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Comments

Rula

your perception of wealth is pretty strong...I will look forward to how it evolves when you do the edits...i will keep following this...in the mean time I guess you need to correct the spello in the title...
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Thank you raj

for the correction.
Where else do you think I need to rework?

I have a gut feeling that

I have a gut feeling that there could be more variations.....let me sleep over this and may be I will come up with a few suggestions for your perusal
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Just realized

that these one liners can become good signature lines...don't they?
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There are

absolutely different versions. Does this mean this isn't a good one? And yep for the signature suggestion !

i did say that your

i did say that your perception of wealth is pretty strong...didn't I? so get that that thought outta your mind that this is not good enough...ok?
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Hi Rula

don't know if this is a good version

When w e a l t h is built on code of ethics, it's hard to end up a pauper
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thank you dear raj

thank you. Of course, it's good enough to give me a hint.
Any better now?
Hope i didn't mess as usual

Good change Rula

Good change Rula
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Thank you so much

for letting me know the changes aren't bad dear raj.

Hey common Rula! now where

Hey common Rula! now where this "bad" comes from?...i did say they are good...
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