J o y is whelming of the heart, rousing goosebumps, beaming in a smile; as buoyant as the first kiss blushing a maiden's cheeks...
Aug 14, 2018
Joy [Runic Symbol:Wunjo]
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Direction: How does this theme appeal to you?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Raj
Thank you. This is absolutely an enjoyable read. It put a wide smile as I was reading through. ;-)^_^
Rula
when you said reading through made you smile...it is a complement which is satisfying...i am trying to guess which portion of the line made you smile...perhaps something you could relate to )
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it is worth a smile
but r u attempting to say all in a single line
or classifying what joy is
please salvage my mind raj
long time no sea
though there is always a lot
though there is always a lot more to write about.....i am trying a hand at concizing to the best possible extent...
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great then raj
help me concise my FALLS POEM JUST POSTED ..Will edit to include politicians as i skipped
over their fall