Each day when I get up early
I wonder am I now standing
at the end or far edge of eternity
as I am graduating into eighty
will let you all know
whether all who knew
recognized me
so remain standing by
I may still on the mommy Earth sigh
bit longer while
so continue to bless me
with your shining teeth
as you laugh or smile
Aug 12, 2018
Beyond Eternity
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
You be always
remembered Lovedly for your good heart.
I always thought that our life is counted by the deeds not years.
Enjoyed the sense of peace in this piece
Thank you so much Rula for your kind words
I am happy at least
you will recall