raj
Jul 18, 2018

Senryu # 2

while introspecting
my co-relation with life
lilting waves prompt me

About This Poem

Style/Type: Structured: Eastern

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Somewhere in the world, IND

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Comments

gregwa8

this is sweet. "lilting waves prompt me." love that. love how life acts upon you and your introspection, and you in turn act, or write, or do whatever you do. nice poem.

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raj

6 years 9 months ago

Thanks for the read Greg and good to know you liked it...

It is said that as per theory of relativity to compare anything is relative to what one compares with e.g. tall or short...high or low...

in this poem the relative point is an ocean hence the concluding third line...
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Rula

Rula

6 years 9 months ago

more with greg.
This is an adorable senryu Raj.
Love it!

R

raj

6 years 9 months ago

Thanks Rula....i have learnt that the third line should ideally make readers interpret the meaning which is what I have been trying to attempt while writing Sunku. Haiku or Sunku...
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