lovedly
lovedly
Jul 03, 2018

My First and Last Frosted Acrostic (Ed by raj methodology...)

L...ove is a lovely Luscious exotic word

O...nly lovers using it can really be Heard

V...ery often many Follow the lover true

E...choes are Heard all over the sea azure- blue

D...istance is no Limitation all this by now knew

L...overs of poetry on the Earth sadly are Minuscule

Y...ou all know it often Smile don't you

GOOD BYES ARE GOOD BYES
only @ TIMES
as I keep coming

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read

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Comments

S

Not just an acrostic but a Rhyming acrostic. Way to get out of your comfort zone......stan

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raj

6 years 10 months ago

It's nice to see you getting yourself noticed by using your creative instinct seriously...
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raj

6 years 9 months ago

if you insert a space after first alphabet of each line letters making up the acrostic will stand out. Other way is to make the first letters bold which is not easy here...for example:-

L ove is a lovely luscious exotic word

O nly lovers using it can be heard

V ery often many follow the lover too

E choes are heard all over the sea blue
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raj

6 years 9 months ago

I already looked and it brings more clarity to the letters. Honestly though it's not my idea ..i made the suggestion because I have seen Acrostics presented that way..therefore no credit is due to me..
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