raj
Jun 20, 2018

Caging birds in flight

somewhere a child was crying
elsewhere the parent was listening

tiny tears wailed "what i did wrong
to find myself in caged walls?"

when flesh and blood is torn to pieces
it is hard to mend the broken fences

is stealing innocence not a crime
by "zero tolerance" touting minds?

is not caging of birds in flight
stealing them of migration right?

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18th June, International Migrants Day
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About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Region, Country: Somewhere in the world, IND

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Rula

Rula

6 years 10 months ago

Last week I lost my canary. It freed itself and flew away. My main concern wasn't that I lost him, what worried me really was that he can't fly for a long distance or be safe high on the trees and away from the dangers. However, I kept saying to myself that he will be in a better place out of the cage anyways.
I can therefore relate to your words.
Thanks for sharing.

R

raj

6 years 10 months ago

Thanks for reading. Noted that it brought out mixed emotions for you about your Canary. May he/she be safe wherever he/she is. I was beginning to think that this poem too is going to be in undiscovered work section like others. your comment helped it escape from that cage :)
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