raj
Jun 15, 2018

Mood Swing

tumultuous waves writhe
sweeping away garbage to sea shores
for life within to sustain in the mother liquor

sun eases her womb bursting with fresh brine
letting out steam to soothe her turmoil
turning buoyant crimson clouds grey

stolen of moonwalk they let loose their temper
reigning havoc with thunderous livid bolts
cool winds rush to ease burden of their anguish

the sky is blue again for birds to fly
paper boats ready to sail on a voyage
barbecues crackle with aromatic laughter
goosebumps sprout on thirsty fields

the crossword is solved,
time to turn the page
p e n d u l u m ~|~ m u l u d n e p
fits in row 1 of blank spaces

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Requesting opinion of readers :- Would it be good to do away with the concluding quatrain?

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Somewhere in the world, IND

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Comments

lovedly

beautiful mood swinging
lovely poetry

I am on a swing too
will you switch ur mood and read me may u
you haven't read since ages
thnx

R

good to know this was a mood swinger for you....thanks for the read...
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