winter
nothing left
from my garden
only
it is not
how I see it
wet stones
remember
green abundance
winter
nothing left
from my garden
only
it is not
how I see it
wet stones
remember
green abundance
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Comments
What a coincidence. Just now
What a coincidence. Just now i posted a Sunku based on Winter making way to summer. Yours is more crisp with all aesthetics.
Thank you, we do often think
Thank you, we do often think alike.
Beautiful
Love it!!!
Thank you
Thank you
Now this strikes me as the epitome
of what you seemed to wish to achieve with the sunku form,
Wistful and elegant.
Hi Jess!
Hi Jess!
What a great way for me to start my morning.
Thank you for your comment.
When I wrote the words the little plot of land on a steep hill behind my house was a bare red clay with a few sticks and twigs. I placed a few rocks here and there in the idea of Zen garden.
I watched the drops of rain water splashing and jumping off of them and wrote this poem.
Now it is completely green almost foaming.
Deers leave hoof prints so I know they visit, but the plants are growing so fast that I can't see what deer damaged.
I also saw a snake, chipmunks, blue Jeys, red Cardinals and a bunch of dragonflies.
Have a good night!!!
I also saw a snake, chipmunks, blue Jeys, red Cardinals and a ..
I also saw a snake,
chipmunks, blue Jeys, red Cardinals and a bunch of
dragonflies.
take care
the Sunku will help u in making/Breeding a zoo
then more sunkus wll issue
Cool
Cool
.
unintended my regrets
Iriz
:)
:)
apologies
sorry meant it in a friendly way