gregwa8
gregwa8
Jun 02, 2018

Love Handles

freckles, dimples, a cleft lip, a lazy eye --
all the little features you think determine why
nobody will love you, could actually turn out
to be the things your partner is crazy about

a limp that they like
from some accident on a bike
maybe slurred speech
whispering sweet-nothings at the beach

our imperfections and quirks
can hardly hold a candle

to exceptional desire
why do you think they call them
"love handles"?

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Region, Country: Maryland, USA

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raj

6 years 10 months ago

I am not sure if your poem is about fetishes and also not sure how it got posted twice
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