Ask any rich guy
what is losing like
ask a Casino connoisseur
what is it like to lose
ask any sexy guy
what he can do
when his doesn't rise
the biggest loss is this
and
ask a woman
what loss is
when hubby starts looking at women
more beautiful than she
'tis profound MISERY
Euthanasia please!!!!
that alone loss is
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Interesting poem.
Interesting poem.
Good question is raised, what is loss?
I guess you mean the biggest loss is of what we value the most.
I wonder why you limited your examples by very short list? What made you choose them out of the ocean of misery?
Anyway, euthanasia, is not something I would welcome if my husband starts looking around.
great
comments on MATTERS MILITARY
as promised
I still await
i think this poem
has lost its value
to be compared with
a lost one
Hi Lovedly
The theme of your poem is pretty good. IRiz is right about mentioning more examples rather than just profanity...loss is a perception may not always be material ..it could also be lack of something like say rainbows in the sky or of senses like memory....smell...or even perceived notion of warmth ...affection...
just my thoughts aroused by your poem...give it some thought if you want to edit / update your poem
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raj
thank you for ur views
it was spontaneously written
as a comment
on someones lament
it was not conceived like normal
IVF
perhaps possible
revision is marking time 23 hours to doom! hence stand by for it
Tears of joy for some only
Tears Only Tears
When I view
poems not too few
composed in 1972
by class poets here
tears roll in my eyes
sad for them
not me
none has commented
and all we think is
POETS are we
PERHAPS
in your case
I
only
The easiest commodity is writing
we all can compose
till the cows come home
but the most difficult
is this
To be able to sell yourself
your wisdom
your poem
that is like taking a horse
to the pond
but you can't make him
DRINK
Likewise offer wine
we all will come
ask to see your
printed INK
All will say
without exception
nice wine
fine
why pine
send your poem home
we shall try and see
when there is time
perhaps
some portions read may we..
Likewise
I have had many occasions to ask
HAVE YOU READ MY POEM?
They Question
YOU COMPOSE?
Poetry!! !
Then...TEARS only tears
only tears
TEARS
and its only tears!
SAD for now me