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Nov 07, 2010

youngest gal! then two years ago...since grown

youngest gal!
you are very young
exquisitely beautiful
charming!

guys and gals
you‘ll be alarming
as they will be desiring....

take great care
be totally aware
Internet is actually dicey!
life is pricey

guys want that only
what by now you
ought to know
hopefully!

so take care
my youngest friend
before you meet
a premature
towards the end!

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

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Country/Region: ROU

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14 years 5 months ago

In reply to by shirley harrison

keep smiling
and ur precious time
do keep whiling

for when smiles are lost
in the mirage of time ,
where will you be or i,
no one can that ever chime
so smile at me,
twill be lovely
for the lovedly

S

What a nice poetic warning to a loved one on the dangers in the world and in the cyber spaces.......stan

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that you recall
is an honour scribbled
hope the young ones
don't get quickly dribbled,

thanks Stan
for u and i
we r both
DAWN
till the final morn!!!
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