valene
Mar 15, 2018

thought for the day

running in place gets you nowhere
hiding out does the same
missing out on what life has to offer
methinks is a bloody shame

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Not actively editing

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Geezer

I'm thinking that this is a short and nicely put together poem.
Geezer.
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V

literally wrote it off the cuff. appreciate your positive input.

valene

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raj

7 years 1 month ago

Though provoking short poem...
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V

...a supine potion
would best serve your purpose, methinks
you've need of weed
for nowt's guaranteed
to give you the utmost of winks.

i could say more,
but i'm too zonked
-already today i've thricely been bonked.

Best wishes....val..

R

raj

7 years 1 month ago

:)

V

i'm not certain punching is required here but i appreciate your input. i said what was in me head at the time and believe it got me point across.

thanks Aeon.

val

mand

mand

6 years 12 months ago

Live life to the full - it doesn't last long!

Sharp and concise - a good reminder and absolutely true!

Thanks for sharing! :)

Love Mand xxxx

V

valene

6 years 12 months ago

thanks mand for taking the time to share your thoughts! the older i get the more i realize i should have had the courage to take more risks and not be concerned what others have to say. i allowed my 30 year marriage to get in the way. but once i mustarded up my gumption to ask my ex for a trial separation and then we both agreed divorce would help keep our friendship in tact, i finally had the time to start to get to know 'me,' the person i'd kept hidden for all those years. that's when i finally started to try things i never even considered. i'm still a work in progress and that's a good feeling!

val

V

valene

6 years 12 months ago

I wish the same for you :)!