hopeless_writer
Feb 27, 2018

Mistakes...

An eerie shiver,
A spinning head,
Lips quiver,
Confusion ahead,

mistakes,
Ruin a day,
Derail a week,
stuipidity,

Dreary feeling,
Watering eye,
Anxious thinking,
I tried...

I FUCKED UP!!

About This Poem

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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IRiz

IRiz

7 years 1 month ago

Nice one.
Makes me want to make a mistake or two.

R

raj

7 years 1 month ago

Dear Hopeless Writer through this poem you have given hope to those who make a mistake or two...no one is perfect...
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