Boys can be bulimic too

I echo the comments and sentiments of JRS above..
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On a pedestal, I place this poem to live a life all it's own. A compliment to the poet for a very special piece.

What did you think of my title?
-The alliteration of "boys/bulimic," pops perfectly off the lips.
- I, perhaps we, don't think of boys & bulimic so that immediately captures attention.
- The whole title "Boys can be bulimic too," summarizes the whole poem and could be a poem all by itself. It certainly had me thinking, "yeah." Great title!

How was my language use?
- Consistent with the theme. "Try to check how I chew," is super good.

What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
- The conversational writing against the AABB rhyme scheme is a bit of genius. The rhyme is almost unnoticeable and yet so present.

How does this theme appeal to you?
- I love the theme. It hangs out in the chilling shadows but is sharp and penetrating.

How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
- A powerful beginning and ending in its simply stated economy.

Is the internal logic consistent?
- All good.

This is a little gem of a poem scooby. Very impressed at how much you've written in such brevity.

Wow, seems a rather simple little
poem but is packed with power!

The only thing I could suggest, it feels like
the second sentence could use another
syllable or two, that is the only thing I felt
or heard.

Thank you for sharing with us.