The devil is a liar
he swore
it would be different
but we knew
it wouldn’t be
nothing changes
one more time
one more lie
no more chances
______
The devil is a liar
he swore
it would be different
but we knew
it wouldn’t be
nothing changes
one more time
one more lie
no more chances
______
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Hi Barbara
I think this is very open and also out of form. Try to make the reader think which you are more than capable of...i am sure you will do it during edits...
Regards...
Ok
Not sure what that means
Barbara i meant syllable
Barbara i meant syllable count wise...
Regards...
Oh yeah
This wasn’t a sunku lol. I was just writing I’ll change the title
Very true the devil lies
We all know his destiny and its not in heaven that's for sure
Yes
All,day long