Summer
Is popping
with nature buzz
animals
insects
ensemble chirps
arrived
summertime
Gaia’s Kingdom
Summer
Is popping
with nature buzz
animals
insects
ensemble chirps
arrived
summertime
Gaia’s Kingdom
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Barbara
I will look out for the edits you make for which there is room..your Sunku inspired this
Beyond
the Spring
I hear a buzz
Beetles
chirping
summer songs
Others
join party
from their nests
......
Beautiful raj
I’m weird like that. It’s still spring and everything is drowsy about waking up but I hear them as if they are awake alive and buzzing all around.
Stanza 3 could be
Stanza 3 could be
Soon
our tails swing
in boogie dance
....
Nice raj
I’m visualizing the ending as a Kingdom like the lion king movie but with the whole planet involved as a Kingdom
Yep
That's what was the intended purpose in sync withe the "Ensemble" in your title
....
Yeah
Glad it worked
excellent
https://vocaroo.com/i/s10M1MgDzhAB
Thanks
I appreciate your visit as always