tsunami, SUNKU -IRIZ WORK SHOP!

tsunami,
really does
come infrequent

pierce
eyes and see
remnants galore

await
another may
come ashore

(of syllables I ain't too sure
do assure)

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read

Comments

Tsunami

Tsunami
Is not funny
It is a serious truble
Be ready
To dig out
All your poetic strength
Discard all the rubble
Come out fresh
And write something tiny

Lol

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