sweet breeze
or howling gale
I fly by it
I am
a dry leaf
not held by weight
I will
love until
I crumble
sweet breeze
or howling gale
I fly by it
I am
a dry leaf
not held by weight
I will
love until
I crumble
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
think of modifying it... if you will
not hold by weight
not held!!! by... may be okay/better if u will
have you read my Feb poetry
kindly do and advise
I'm freer now till tomorrow
I did . Thank you.
I did .
Thank you.
making most of life we are
making most of life we are blessed with by overcoming adversities is what I read between the lines...at least that is how i perceived it...
loved the presentation of message....
Thank you.
Thank you.