IRiz
IRiz
Feb 23, 2018
This poem is part of the workshop:

Sunku: beyond rhyme and rhythm, search for new structures in short form

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Leaf

sweet breeze
or howling gale
I fly by it

I am
a dry leaf
not held by weight

I will
love until
I crumble

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Washington DC, USA

Favorite Poets: Matsuo Bashō

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raj

7 years 2 months ago

making most of life we are blessed with by overcoming adversities is what I read between the lines...at least that is how i perceived it...

loved the presentation of message....