Grandkids
my heart string
home for Christmas
no water
a week in
at the hotel
Grandkids
hung out
with grandma
Grandkids
my heart string
home for Christmas
no water
a week in
at the hotel
Grandkids
hung out
with grandma
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
What a sweet memory
I especially love the first stanza.
What a great metaphor!
Thanks
Glad you enjoy it
Barbara
A great write and I love this new way,
it makes you think.
Take care of you,
Me as always, Ian. x
Thanks Ian
I appreciate you visiting my work. Glad you like it. I like writing this way. Iām gonna master it for sure