"Shit hole"
hard to fix
for Commander
Gutless
"Fire and Fury"
his empty threat
Tweeting
his Trumpets
to raise alarm
"Shit hole"
hard to fix
for Commander
Gutless
"Fire and Fury"
his empty threat
Tweeting
his Trumpets
to raise alarm
Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Interesting
Interesting
You use allusions here nicely.
Rhythm is alarming and engaging.
The first line screams.
Looks good to me.
I am not familiar with cultural refs, though. But I am sure other readers will be more understanding.
Thanks for the read and to
Thanks for the read and to know you found this interesting....obviously this has reference to the compulsive and impulsive Tweeter from your home town Washington...smiles...
Regards...
Lol, that much I have
Lol, that much I have comprehended.