fink555
fink555
Feb 13, 2018

The Dumbwaiter

Here she is, anything
can be asked of her
Sea gravel underfoot
Behind a guillotine before
the soda jerk opens it
to a glass vegetable spread
with cutlass smiles
her mime complexion
in this photograph
to be still life beauty
before a night of trekking
because she only wants
to escape our plan
move away from a Lady in a Lake
through dumb waiter
lobbies filled with hands
crawling to catch her
spilling voodoo guitar hands
The bug carnies sing
the same song
But different as a melody
polished
by children with cancer,
or to brush
her filament wings as angel flutes
that can break the sound mirror
with a cough;
to share a tune
with death,
and kinless troubadours
to light a wick
over their tents
so they can run back
with flashlights

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: Albany NY

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Comments

IRiz

IRiz

7 years 2 months ago

Thank you.
Sorry no critique. Allow me just be a reader and live a fragment of the life you depicted vividly and feverishly

fink555

you very much. Couldn't have asked for a better response.